Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sadic's mother

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Sadic's mother

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 16:21, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Okay. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:18, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:23, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:57, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:21, March 30, 2014 (UTC)
5. Glorious Cadenoms. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:39, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
6. Sorry for the late response! Manoof (talk) 04:12, April 7, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Manoof

• It might be worth splitting the second line just after the word slaves, it's a bit of a mouth full and separates the two pieces of information (status, son's being taken). Perhaps something like "...slaves. Despite this, Sadic's force sensitivity..." Manoof (talk) 03:52, March 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 15:24, March 31, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

1. Sith Empire for affiliation in the infobox? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:24, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
   • Nah, it's not specified. They're low-class, so they're not necessarily citizens. Cade Calrayn 16:45, March 19, 2014 (UTC)