- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Rueful Confession
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 17:30, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:45, January 31, 2020 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:10, January 31, 2020 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 15:39, January 31, 2020 (UTC)- Zed42 (talk) 20:39, January 31, 2020 (UTC)
- LordMominutiae (talk) 03:08, February 1, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:34, February 1, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Anil
Some context for Tabor Seitaron would be nice.As far as I can see, the novel says that the test flight was perhaps the last time he experienced artificial gravity. This should be reflected in the article.- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:53, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
- (Reviewing note) The is no need to specify "canon" in BTS if the subject has nothing to do with the Legends continuity. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:56, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
- I need to stop forgetting that. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:53, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
Can Herald being an Imperial II-class SD be sourced to the novel itself? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:15, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
- The novel says its a more recent make of the Star Destroyer. Unless Star Wars: The Rebel Files says so, but I don't have that source. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 23:20, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
- The book depicts an Imperial II-class SD participating in the Siege of Inyusu Tor. The novel suggests that only one Star Destroyer, the Herald, was present for the siege, right? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:45, January 31, 2020 (UTC)
- The book depicts an Imperial II-class SD participating in the Siege of Inyusu Tor. The novel suggests that only one Star Destroyer, the Herald, was present for the siege, right?
- The novel says its a more recent make of the Star Destroyer. Unless Star Wars: The Rebel Files says so, but I don't have that source. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 23:20, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
"Tabor Seitaron, who had formally served on Star Destroyers…" Is this supposed to be "formerly"?Zed42 (talk) 22:03, January 30, 2020 (UTC)- Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:53, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
You should further specify that Seitaron was a captain in the Empire.Zed42 (talk) 23:02, January 30, 2020 (UTC)- Does "Imperial captain" work? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 23:20, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:11, February 2, 2020 (UTC)