Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Revwien coleslaw (second nomination)

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Revwien coleslaw

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:57, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A former CA/GA by EJ.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:55, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
2. Nom nom nom. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:02, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
3. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:03, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 00:39, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:06, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• "XY was a type of X" — that's redundant and doesn't benefit readers at all. Precedence was to have sentences like that, but we're moving away from them, so the article body here should be reworded.
• The BTS doesn't explain why Revwiens were an abandoned concept. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 09:08, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:31, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
    • That's much better OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:02, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:08, 18 July 2021 (UTC)