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Republic scout speeder

  • Nominated by: CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 01:30, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. AmazinglyCool (talk) 03:49, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 06:32, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:01, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:41, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
  5. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 07:40, 7 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

Amazingly
  • Add a {{1st}}. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:20, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Completely missed that. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 02:42, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • If a republic trooper used the speeder in a different form of media, that should be highlighted in the Appearances or Sources list. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:22, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • It seems the page for the source has a lot more information about the BTS.AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:26, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
    • The problem with that page is that there is no way to confirm any of those claims. I have searched the Internet for multiple days now, and I haven't found anything that confirms what Rebelscum.com says. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 02:42, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Also in the infobox parameter, "Targeting systems" link your input to Targeting computer/Legends. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:30, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • When listing the armaments in the article body, please use an Oxford comma
  • Grand Army of the Republic is infobox-exclusive OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:36, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Is that good? CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 22:37, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
      • That's fine, but there's another issue: the toy packaging never states that the speeder was a military craft.
  • The article body can be split up into two paragraphs. It makes the article look clearer to readers. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 22:56, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Excellent. One last thing: colours. You only mentioned that the speeder's red with a white Galactic Roundel. You're missing out the colour of the cannons and the fact that the speeder's got a red-and-white colour scheme. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 23:55, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • I think the ref in the last sentence should be moved back to before the word Felucia, and the fact that it was on Felucia can be sourced to the Hasbro ref.
    • Fixed. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 17:14, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry to interject, but while what CC-8 said is true, we aim to use as little references as possible. Since the fact that the planet was Felucia can be sourced to both SWE and Hasbro, you should just use ref 3 for "the jungle planet Felucia" OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:01, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
        • I don't think that works because as it was before it looked like the speeder being on Felucia could be sourced to the Encyclopedia, whereas the only information that it's actually needed for is to describe what Felucia is. Also if we want to consolidate references there'd definitely be Clone Wars episode or other source that identifies what Felucia is and who the Clone Wars were fought between. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:13, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
          • I've decided to go ahead with OOM's reasoning, per what was said in Discord. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 20:12, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Current standard is to avoid using the word this in the body.
    • "This" was removed by OOM's copy-edit, but I'll definitely keep it in mind for my future articles. CT-1742 Clone Army patch (talk) 17:14, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Should write about how the roof lifted up so a trooper could sit inside. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:26, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:42, 7 May 2021 (UTC)