Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Republic Fourth Fleet

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Republic Fourth Fleet

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:30, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:00, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
2. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:42, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:49, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
5. DaRealDarkLord (talk) 05:27, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• When a source has three or more authors, precedent is to not list them in the bts.
• 3 BFE can be pipelinked to 22 BBY. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:48, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done with both! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:56, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

Erebus

• Please fix the Subjugator-class's link. The class was never identified as Subjugator-class battleship.
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
• Class identification for the Triumphant.
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
• You kind of jump information with the last two sentences. The first says that the Malevolence destroyed much of the Fourth Fleet and later ambushed Plo Koon's fleet, and in the second, you go right to saying it was destroyed at the Battle of the Kaliida Nebula. I would fix that and provide a little more information on the Malevolence Campaign.
  • Hopefully cleared up! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
• You should vary the way each sentence starts, since you currently start each with "The..."
  • Not sure how else to start it when it's "The Republic Fourth Fleet," "The Malevolence," etc. Please let me know if you have any suggestions! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
    • You could start the last sentence of the first paragraph with "However" instead. Another thing, the Malevolence didn't really ambush Plo Koon's fleet in the episode, since they tracked it to the Abregado system, but were unable to destroy it. I could also copy-edit it if you make the changes and let you know if you like my changes. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 19:04, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Yeah I think that'll be better! I'll go over the changes after you've made your adjustments --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:12, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Yeah your edit works. I've also removed the unnecessary info as per Macaroni --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:48, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
• Please remove "first" from the BTS. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 02:57, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Done! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• I would like you to switch to a BBY date. Using multiple dating systems across different articles will only create confusion for readers. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:29, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Switched but I need to clean it up some more, will let you know when it's done. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:50, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Been more than a week since the objection, how's it going? UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:00, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
      • I was on vacation until the 28th, just cleaned it up --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:17, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Copy-edit. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:36, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
• Please implement CSWECite for Ref 5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:36, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:05, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Manoof

• Are we still using Template:Republic Navy units? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:49, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes, since the template is still active --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:45, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:02, 3 December 2021 (UTC)