Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Regga

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Regga

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With the ref note, it's not the most obvious the first race that occurs the month after the second is the Boonta Eve Classic. That should be reworded.
Establish Tatooine was a planet. If Anakin's Fate possibly doesn't mention, as I didn't check, might need something else as citation.
Male citation from infobox needs to be repeated elsewhere. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:55, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
The Anakin's Fate behind the scenes text still doesn't make it the most obvious that race has to be the same event, as opposed to another event which he survived, before changing his mind, returning to the activity, and dying. I do know, however, the similarity between the events makes it pretty obvious they're the same event, so if you can reword further, would be beneficial. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:17, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Please use the CSWECite template. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:19, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- I've been swamped, I'll check your objections in the next 24 hours. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:20, 27 April 2023 (UTC)

Since Ep I and Anakins Fate released in the same year, you'll have to use and cite their full release dates in the BTS.
What does "stayed too high" mean?
You should pipelink death at its first instance when you write "dying" instead of "death."
You should provide context for Anakin Skywalker, but something simple like "Toydarian shopkeeper Watto commanded his slave Anakin Skywalker"
You should probably specify that the Boonta Eve Classic is a race.
I don't think you have to split the BTS into two paragraphs.
Any quotes? AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:19, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
- I've been swamped, I'll check your objections in the next 24 hours. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:20, 27 April 2023 (UTC)

Is his nickname Regga the Hammerhead? If so, this needs to be in the article. Without checking Anakin's Fate, I can't be sure, assuming it does say it, if Regga the Hammerhead is a nickname or just referring to his species' nickname. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:57, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Taking over this nomination. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:43, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

Unaddressed objections too far overdue; can be put into a new nom if taken over again.—spookywilloww^talk 22:27, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 22:29, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 00:12, 13 May 2023 (UTC)