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Reedox-stew
- Nominated by: Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 16:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: I'm not sure if I'd want to eat this stuff.
(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
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~Savage
14:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)- Looks great! Descriptive and well-written. OtterSurf 18:26, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Tinwe(comlink) 11:25, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
- NaruHina Talk
21:15, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
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In your ref, "Leland Chee, the person in charge of the Holocron continuity database, Lucasfilm Ltd.'s way of keeping Star Wars continuity straight, said that Han Solo was born in 29 BBY." This is a run-on sentence. Break it up.NaruHina Talk 18:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Hmmm, I'm not sure how I could break it up. Perhaps I should just shorten it and say: "In Major Character Birth Years on Keeper of the Holocron — Leland Chee's StarWars.com Blog (original site is defunct): Leland Chee, the person in charge of the Lucasfilm Ltd.'s Holocron continuity database, said that Han Solo was born in 29 BBY. The New Essential Guide to Characters states that Solo left his master, Garris Shrike, at the age of nineteen, an event that happened shortly before Han Solo had the reedox-stew. Therefore, Solo ate the reedox-stew in 10 BBY." Would that be better?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:24, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
- I'd say "[Everything else]..."at the age of nineteen. This event happened before Han Solo had the reedox-stew; therefore, he ate the reedox-stew in 10 BBY." NaruHina Talk 15:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:18, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Done.--Exiled Jedi
- I'd say "[Everything else]..."at the age of nineteen. This event happened before Han Solo had the reedox-stew; therefore, he ate the reedox-stew in 10 BBY." NaruHina Talk
- Hmmm, I'm not sure how I could break it up. Perhaps I should just shorten it and say: "In
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