Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Reed flute

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Reed flute

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 02:33, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Info from Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded is exactly the same as Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know
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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:14, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Dentface (talk) 22:05, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 22:04, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
4. D MCCG (chat) 13:02, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:50, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Since Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know and Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded provide the same information, we usually refernce to the newest media, so you should change your referencing.
• Author is required in the BTS.
• You should add (Mentioned only) to Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded.
• Does Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know provide all that context for the Ewoks and for the moon of Endor?
• These appearances and sources should be investigated for a mention.
• Since there is no Legends counterpart, saying Star Wars Canon is redundant in the BTS. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:57, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• I've created a disambiguation page for Reed which should be linked in an otheruses template on this article Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:39, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed.--Liverpool92 03:28, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Missing a couple of links OOM 224 21:02, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• AEYNTK says woodwinds such as this and the bird whistle make up the Ewok orchestra. This is significant info so it should be included.
• It's obvious that the image to the right of the mention of reed flute in AEYNTK depicts a reed flute, even just by process of elimination—it's not a drum, it's not a trumpet, not a bird whistle nor xylophone nor an Ewok. Also, reed flutes exist in real-life, so it'd be appropiate to mention them here. Following up on this, I'd also mention reed (plant) and have a hunt of the instrument by going through the Endor scenes in ROTJ. OOM 224 21:15, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Partly addressed via Discord; now missing image and physical description of the flute OOM 224 14:26, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Also, the material field in the infobox could be filled in OOM 224 18:16, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
• Reposting objections raised over on Discord: As I said on the 24th, the article is now missing a description and an image of the flute from AEYNTK OOM 224 17:59, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Discussed this over on Discord. Basically, that image depicts what Legends identifies as a churi bird caller, so it's best not to determine on our part whether the intrument is a reed flute or a bird whistler. OOM 224 22:04, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Luca is mistaken, {{Mo}} should not be used in sources. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:01, 5 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Handled.--Liverpool92 02:23, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
• Does the source support reed being a plant? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:28, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
  • No.--Liverpool92 21:56, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Needs another source, then. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed.--Liverpool92 02:56, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
        • It's still sourced to AEYNTK. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:56, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
          • I've sourced it to where the reed plant is first identified--Liverpool92 02:46, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
            • You told me above that the source does not support reed being a plant. Does it? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:48, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
            • Ah I don't think the edit had saved yet. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:50, 10 November 2021 (UTC)

Dent

• Does Absolutely Everything You Need to Know explicitly state that Ewoks are sentient? If not, you will need a separate source to cite this. Dentface (talk) 00:53, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
  • It doesn't but it shows the ewoks doing activities of sentient species. Plus the Ewok is sourced to ROTJ for its sentience so I don't see it as necessary.--Liverpool92 04:09, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• I apologize for my dumb mistake with {{Mo}}. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:32, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:50, 10 November 2021 (UTC)