Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Razelfiin

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Razelfiin

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 18:38, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:12, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:42, March 8, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 15:49, March 8, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 16:10, March 8, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Doesn't the HoloNet article establish Tynna as a planet by calling Razelfiin its "planetary" leader? In that case, I don't think you need another reference to source the planet bit in the article.
  • I'd say the infobox and categories should reflect that Razelfiin was affiliated with the Galactic Republic since she was the planetary leader of a Republic world.
  • The HoloNet article doesn't mention the Confederacy at all. You'll need additional source(s) for that.
  • The last sentence of BTS is unnecessary.
  • Please format the {{CSWECite}} in the Sources according to its usage instructions.
  • A release year/date for the HoloNet article in BTS would be nice, with a proper source, of course. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:04, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
    • All done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:52, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
      • There is also another mention of Confederacy in the article which can't be sourced to the HoloNet News. The CSWE entry for "Razelfiin" actually does mention the Separatists, so you can use that instead.
  • The same entry also confirms the stone mite infestation, while the HoloNet article says it was "suspected" of. The article should be updated accordingly.
  • There is another entry that mentions Razelfiin in CSWE, it's the entry for "Tynna" on page 271, and it has some information that should be added here. For example, the entry suggests Razelfiin was a Tynnan as well, confirms that Tynna did join the Separatists after Razelfiin declared her intention to contact Dooku, etc. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:45, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
TQG
  • Could you reword the first sentence so that it states her species explicitly? Currently that information is infobox exclusive. Toqgers (talk) 00:25, February 28, 2020 (UTC)
    • Sure thing. Done. OtterSurf (talk) 08:11, February 28, 2020 (UTC)
      • Make sure not to forget a separate reference since the species is from a different source as the rest of the sentence! I took the liberty of doing it myself since it's a simple fix, but otherwise the change looks good. Toqgers (talk) 23:43, February 28, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
  • Since you are linking the "end" of the Clone Wars to Mission to Mustafar, it would be only logical to link the "onset" of the Clone Wars to the Battle of Geonosis.
    • That wasn't me, but done. OtterSurf (talk) 14:06, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Dates for the start and end of the Clone Wars can be provided.
  • Context for Lutris needed. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:37, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • It's never actually clarified as to what Lutris is, only the name is ever mentioned. I guess it's a city, but nothing says that it is. It could be a town, village, region, country or canton for all we know. OtterSurf (talk) 14:08, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • According to the Lutris article, it's the capital city of Tynna. Can you confirm that info based on sources listed in that article? QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:58, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
        • I didn't write that article, but it's pretty much wrong. OtterSurf (talk) 17:51, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
          • Very well, if we don't know what Lutris is, exactly, then the context is indeed unneccessary, so I've removed it. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:42, March 8, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:10, March 8, 2020 (UTC)