Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rata Nebula/Legends

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Rata Nebula/Legends

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 21:02, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Somehow only my second CAN with a picture
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:32, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Well done. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:15, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 14:36, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 20:12, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:39, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Does this not depict the Rata Nebula in the background?
  • Good find, missed that completely.
    • Between this and the Atlas image, you should be able to describe the nebula's color.
      • Done
• If the primary source describes Chiss (and the Human Fel?) as training on Rhigar, you should fill out the immigrated species field of the infobox.
  • Done
    • Please work in the fact that Fel was Human and his connection to the academy into the body.
      • Barely in the word limit :P Done. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:18, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
• Did Thrawn really return from the dead in 19 ABY? Or was it a supposed return? In any case, slightly more context for this is necessary, including the date of Thrawn's death and the fact that he was a Chiss. This last bit especially would help explain the connection between Rhigar, and the Chiss Ascendancy in general, and Thrawn.
  • Added, hopefully that's good enough.
• Does the source really establish that the nebula itself, not just specifically the academy on Rhigar, was affiliated with the Household Phalanx and the Empire of the Hand? I'd generally be very careful with making claims that any organization held a nebula under their control. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:49, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I see your point, removed. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:25, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• I've recently uploaded a higher-quality version of the Chiss Ascendancy map, please crop the infobox image out of that. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:54, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I couldn't get a much better picture, but it's uploaded. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:18, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Not sure what happened here. I linked you to a high-rez version of the map that you should crop out the nebula from. This has not been done. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:24, 24 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Yakov

• Not really an objection but shouldn't the word "clone" at the end link to Mitth'raw'nuruodo (clone) rather than Cloning/Legends? -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:07, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Yeah, probably better. Fixed VergenceScatter (talk) 21:08, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:39, 29 August 2021 (UTC)