Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rainboh

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Rainboh

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:50, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The Jeby cult must continue! :P
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Support

1. I unironically love that artwork. Fan26 (Talk) 02:08, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
2. Adorable! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:17, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
3. JEBY CULT FOREVERR! ~ D MCCG (chat) 12:51, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
4. I love this! Dentface (talk) 17:05, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
6. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:17, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
7. OOM 224 14:04, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• I think mentioning the Hapes Cluster part in the Bts isn't necessary. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 23:25, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Truncated. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:50, 10 October 2021 (UTC)
• There's a couple of spots in the last two body sentences that read as if the Jeby is an individual creature rather than a species
  • Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:13, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Rynmar Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:47, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:13, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please add the release month for the magazine.
  • Added, sorry, it slipped my mind. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:02, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
• Just to confirm, you've checked the Atlas yourself? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:55, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Yep, have I missed something? I have just checked again and didn't find anything more than what is written. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:02, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Nah you're good, I wanted to make sure you didn't mix it up with the Rainboh system. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:17, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• "rocky" — is this based solely on the image, or is it from additional info from the source?
  • It's based on the magazine: "The surface is rocky and rainbow-colored." LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:22, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
• Grammatical errors in the last two sentences. Please revise.
  • "Whenever a Jeby would laugh"
    • Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:22, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
  • "replace them [the spots] on its body" — this doesn't really make sense OOM 224 18:13, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
    • To be honest, I don't understand what is wrong with the sentence, what would you like me to do? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:22, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Better. I've fixed the second one with my copy-edit. OOM 224 21:06, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
• "As such, the editors of Star Wars Galaxy Magazine received many submissions from that class." — While significant, I don't think this is something needed on this article. OOM 224 21:06, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Truncated, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:52, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:04, 22 October 2021 (UTC)