Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/RJ-909

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RJ-909

—spookywilloww^talk 21:00, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
Welcome to the CAN! Fan26 (Talk) 15:03, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 18:36, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
Nice work, looking forward to future nominations from you! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:46, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
--Lewisr (talk) 04:22, January 14, 2020 (UTC)
LordMominutiae (talk) 06:41, January 15, 2020 (UTC)
Congratulations on your first nomination! Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:37, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

~~Could you work in the 'between 10 BBY and 13 BBY' from the infobox into the article body?~~—spookywilloww^talk 22:11, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
- Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:20, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

~~"causing the two pilots to collide with each other and kill them both" Grammatical error here.~~ Fan26 (Talk) 22:18, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
- I don't see the error here, could you be more specific? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:54, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
  - If you don't see it I may be wrong then, but I think "kill them both" is in the wrong tense if it's to be hooked up to the clause "...pilots collide with each other". Fan26 (Talk) 14:32, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
    - I tried something else now. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:54, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
      - Yeah, that works, thank you. Fan26 (Talk) 15:01, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Solo: A Star Wars Story The Official Guide doesn't explicitly say that Solo takes place between 13 BBY and 10 BBY, so it needs further explanation. This article is a pretty good example for you. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:38, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
- Done, is it more suitable now? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:54, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
  - That works, but I have made a few adjustments as The Official Guide directly dates Han's time in the Imperial Navy, so there is no need to mention the events of the film Solo. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:43, January 13, 2020 (UTC)
~~Category:Humans should be added.~~
~~One last thing, a brief mention about that hologram stuff at the end would be nice.~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:43, January 13, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:49, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

~~Issue #2, in which the crash between RJ-909 and the other pilot is shown in a hologram, mentions that Yurib Nakan was leading the TIE pilots. I think that detail is worth mentioning.~~ Zed42 (talk) 09:28, January 12, 2020 (UTC)
- Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:32, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:51, January 15, 2020 (UTC)