Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Purong

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Purong

• Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 04:29, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Great work! Hope to see a lot more out of this book. (I'd change the BTS a bit, but that is just my personal taste). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:03, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Yarngkov -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 18:11, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 23:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
4. Good work, but if a character is pictured, please don't nominate without adding the image. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:39, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
5. Liverpool92 10:55, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Lucorng

• Does Purong appear in ANH? Otherwise you should change your referencing.
• City can be linked.
• The BTS is unrefernced.
• You need year of release for the The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book.
• I'd avoid using brackets, but it is just a stylistic choice (commas are better) and the "only" is unnecessary.
• As Yakov pointed out, please provide an image (if they appear) or change the (First appearance) to (First mentioned) (if they don't). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:46, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Not sure, I will check on that. I think it's Bom Vimdin, which is where confusion comes from. The ANH reference was meant to work for Mos Eisley and Tatooine.
  • Yes, linked city.
  • Does the BTS referencing look good?
  • Removed brackets and 'only'.
  • There is an image, and I am looking into getting that sorted. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 15:19, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
    • You can probably reference the last senetnce to The Mos Esiley Cantina Pop-Up Book too. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:45, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• As Imperators pointed out on Discord, the last two senetences of the BTS should be deleted since they are speculation. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:37, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Alrighty then Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:42, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• "The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book was released in 1995 and was written by Kevin J. Anderson and Rebecca Moesta and was illustrated by Ralph McQuarrie." Those repeated "and"s break up the sentence, condensing the information and using commas would work better. Fan26 (Talk) 18:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Bingo bango, that does improve the flow for sure! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:46, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I've condensed it further. Fan26 (Talk) 02:03, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
• Missing links in date ref. Fan26 (Talk) 02:03, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Alright alright, there we go! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:22, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Still missing one or two links Fan26 (Talk) 03:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Was the answer Death? Do I get a gold star or are there still links to find? It's like a search-and-find puzzle. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:42, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
        • You also missed Cantina/Legends, but good work nonetheless. Have yuour gold star :P Fan26 (Talk) 23:38, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• The pale skin is infobox exclusive
  • Yes Jade Moonstroller (talk) 17:54, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
• Should specify that Purong used a blaster and some of the clothing should be described
• Purong should be mentioned in the first sentence of the Bts to be consistent with the way other status articles are written Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Yes Jade Moonstroller (talk) 17:54, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Still needs info about Purong's clothes Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:44, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:03, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Can you be more descriptive of the character's clothing rather than just "simple clothing"?
• The last two sentences of the BTS don't really add anything of value to the article, so they should be removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:32, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Regarding clothing: I am unsure of how to be descriptive of what Purong is wearing. Only his backside is visible.
    • But it carries over to the front no? For example, I can see a vest and shorts. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:06, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Okay done. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:30, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Can you also mention the shorts and color of the clothing overall? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:05, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
          • Yes I can! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 00:01, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
  • I feel that the last sentence can be removed, but I don't see an issue with the other one. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:35, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
    • It's pretty unnecessary to state that it looks similar to something else when lots of things do, especially when, in this case, the character's species is identified. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:06, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Okay done. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:30, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Is there any picture available? If not, I’ll vote in support immediately. If so, please add it. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 04:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Image has been added! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:02, 20 October 2021 (UTC)