Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Prudy's hospital

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Prudy's hospital

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 18:35, March 19, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. The things people buy out of love.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:54, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
2. For Valentine's Day, I bought my girlfriend a hospital. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:10, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
3. When flowers just aren't enough. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 05:34, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:31, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:33, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. I know this is picky, but technically, according to the main quote, Kimble bought the hospital for her, instead of building it for her. This would imply that it was not built by Doc. 501st dogma^(talk) 18:12, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
   • Done. Cade Calrayn 18:15, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
     • It still says in the body that he built it for her. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:52, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
       • Fixed. Cade Calrayn 01:39, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • If he bought the hospital in 3,644 BBY, I do not believe that this necessarily means that it was constructed that year. If it was established to be new in the game, you need to mention that it was constructed during this year in the body.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:26, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
     • Bah, fixed. Cade Calrayn 02:30, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• Not gonna object to this, but wouldn't it be better to refer to Kimble as such throughout the article, while keeping the note of his nickname?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:52, March 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 04:53, March 22, 2013 (UTC)