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Procurement Panel
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:22, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:06, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:06, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- VergenceScatter (talk) 00:13, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:36, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Object
Pasta Panel
For when you get back: short story author is missing.Only the release year is necessary, the month should be removed.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:35, 29 August 2021 (UTC)- Not back yet, but found some good service for a short time. Anyway, these should be addressed. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 13:35, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Legislative seems to be infobox-exclusive.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:20, 2 September 2021 (UTC)- Done. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 13:39, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
Can you restructure the line "The panel accepted several of their starship designs for the Republic Navy from those corporations.", the last bit is redundant given "their" refers to those corporations. I think you should also drop the "their" and be specific. Looks great otherwise! Manoof (talk) 09:54, 30 August 2021 (UTC)- How's that? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 13:35, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Does Procurement Panel actually make an appearance or is it only mentioned in the Legends story?UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:20, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- Appearance. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 01:35, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- I will address any and all possible objections when I return from vacation in 7-8 days. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:42, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)