- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Pollux Hax
- Nominated by: Lele Mj
(Holoprojetor) 14:03, June 6, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: None
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- Jinzler
- The article needs to be sourced, in accordance with Wookieepedia:Sourcing
- You should add a quote, anything suitable from the Coruscant chapter of The Illustrated Star Wars Universe will do
- Are you sure that it is appropriate to put him in the Near-Humans category? As far as I am aware, he species is completely unknown, he may be Human or he may not be Near-Human, so unless you know of a source that explicitly calls him a Near-Human, you should remove this
- You could perhaps mention in the "Behind the scenes" section the author of The Illustrated Star Wars Universe, and the year in which it was published
- TISWU says that Hax served as the Emperor's propaganda chief for several years, you should mention this in the article
- You should add a "Personality and traits" section to the article and add a brief description of his appearance, per his picture in TISWU
- You possible also mention in a P&T that Hollux was pro-Imperial, supported the Empire, etc
- In his Coruscant article, Hax mentions that it is unknown what planet the ch'hala tree comes from. This sort of conflicts a bit with a number of sources in the Living Force campaign, where it is well-known that the ch'hala is from the planet Cularin. You may want to consider something about this to the "Behind the scenes" section
- Generally, you need to do more work on the article. I hope this list isn't too daunting, so if you need any help with anything, feel free to ask me or any other users --Jinzler 17:45, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
- The article should also note who illustrated him. Is his portrait concept art or was it an original work by McQuarrie for TISWU? ~ SavageBob 20:41, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
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