Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Pollus Maksim

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Pollus Maksim

  • Nominated by: Cevan IMPpress (talk) 19:35, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. - Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (Talk) 19:38, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:46, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
  3. --Lewisr (talk) 20:13, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
  4. Imperial Information Office AV-6R7Crew Pit 05:00, August 16, 2017 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:12, September 3, 2017 (UTC)
  6. ECvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 09:06, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • Have you noticed the automatic maintenance category at the bottom of the article? The Twitter citation is lacking a screenshot.
    • Gah, I made a note to myself to do that but it seems it slipped by regardless. Added now. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:23, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
  • Ref 3 needs to be expanded into a manual reference note explaining how Aftermath is connected to the battle for Kuat Drive Yards. (Also, maybe you can utilize some of the well-detailed dating used on Timeline of canon media?) Imperators II(Talk) 15:05, August 7, 2017 (UTC)
    • Courtesy of the timeline of canon media page I've added that the battle occurred in the fifth month after the Battle of Endor. However, I've left the year out as I'm not sure we can say for certain exactly what year the events of Life Debt are in. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:23, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
      • Just want to say that Star Wars: Galactic Atlas says that Kes Dameron and Share Bay moved to Yavin in 5 ABY and that was 3 months after Endor, so if its in the fifth month it should also be in 5 ABY too (unless we don't know exactly how long a year lasts) --Lewisr (talk) 17:31, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
        • There's a tweet from Pablo in which he says—in regard to how many months are in a year—to "Go with 12. It's easiest." In that case, the events of Life Debt would indeed be in 5 ABY. I'll try to work on writing up the reference for this shortly—should be a doozy. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:38, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
          • You'll still have to note that Aftermath takes place 2 months after Endor. Imperators II(Talk) 17:47, August 8, 2017 (UTC)
            • Apologies for the delay but it's up now, although it's a bit of a mouthful. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 18:59, August 13, 2017 (UTC)
              • Right now what the note does is establish that Kuat happened no earlier than 5 ABY (what Lewisr told you), but it fails to explain why it didn't happen in, say, 6 ABY (what you found out with the tweet). Imperators II(Talk) 06:22, August 14, 2017 (UTC)
                • Well, I've added in the information from that tweet. I may need to get it another once-over though and try to see if there's any way I can make it more clear. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 01:47, August 24, 2017 (UTC)
                  • I may or may not have helped with that. There's one detail still missing, though. "The novel Aftermath begins prior to the mobile game Star Wars: Uprising, as Bespin is not yet liberated, so the book spans approximately two to three months after the Battle of Endor" - this explains why Aftermath is set after Uprising, but not why Aftermath is set 2-3 months ABE. Imperators II(Talk) 10:48, August 24, 2017 (UTC)
                    • I've gone ahead and rewritten that portion. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:28, August 25, 2017 (UTC)
                      • Sorry, but this sentence is still bloody confusing: "As the planet Bespin is not yet liberated in the novel Aftermath, an event later depicted in Star Wars: Uprising, Aftermath must be set two months after the Battle of Endor as it is said that months have passed since the battle." --you probably shouldn't have two clauses with "as", because I have no idea to what source is the second clause referring and, honestly, how it all leads to the conclusion that Aftermath is set 2 months ABY. Imperators II(Talk) 18:47, August 25, 2017 (UTC)
                        • Hopefully that made things at least slightly more clear. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 17:15, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
                          • You know what? It finally hit me. I think all the world's problems (or at least just the problems with that ref note) might be solved if you split it into two separate reference notes, one for the year 5 ABY, the other for the fifth month thing. And then it won't be such an ungodly wall, either. Imperators II(Talk) 21:00, August 27, 2017 (UTC)
                          • Went ahead and fixed it for you. Imperators II(Talk) 10:12, September 3, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

  • Not an objection, in Life Debt its mentioned the guild head of the Kuat Drive Yards surrendered as well as Maksim, do you reckon its worth adding? If you don't then no worries, just something I wanted to check with you --Lewisr (talk) 19:54, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
    • I was wondering about that. I've gone ahead and added a mention of the guild head into the article, as well as created a page for him or her. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 20:10, August 6, 2017 (UTC)
      • Nice job! --Lewisr (talk) 20:13, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

  1. ECvote Unaddressed objection more than a week old. I left Cevan a message. Imperators II(Talk) 08:23, August 21, 2017 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 13:38, August 23, 2017 (UTC)