Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Polar Sea (Alderaan)

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Polar Sea (Alderaan)

• Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 05:28, 18 March 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 17:42, 26 March 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 255 words (0 introduction, 155 body, 100 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 192 words (0 introduction, 156 body, 36 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

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Support votes

1. CometSmudge (talk) 00:16, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 22:47, 23 March 2025 (UTC)
3. Wok142 (talk) 17:39, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Wok

• For the second sentence, I think it can be rearranged to be smoother. I present two options: 1) "A type of coral that could be found in the sea that was rare according to House of Tagge scion Ronen Tagge" or 2) "A type of coral could be found in the sea, which, according to the House of Tagge scion Ronen Tagge, was rare" Wok142 (talk) 06:00, 26 March 2025 (UTC)
  • How's that now? Lewisr (talk) 06:22, 26 March 2025 (UTC)
    • Great! Wok142 (talk) 17:39, 26 March 2025 (UTC)

Comments

• You can probably add in the BTS section that Alderaan's polar sea was first introduced in the Legends continuity. The Illustrated Star Wars Universe was the first to mention that Alderaan had an "ice-rimmed polar sea." Star Wars Encyclopedia, A Guide to the Star Wars Universe, Third Edition, Revised and Expanded, Coruscant and the Core Worlds and The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia also used this term. The polar sea was also mentioned in Rebel Force: Hostage. You could also add CatCW's image of Alderaan, which quite clearly shows the polar sea.—DKS MaXoO (talk) 00:01, 21 March 2025 (UTC)
  • Thanks for finding those! Made the Legends page and added in this page's BTS, how does that look? I don't think there's enough room for the legends image as it stands Lewisr (talk) 07:19, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
    • Looks good! I've added the image in the Legends article in case you want to use it. —DKS MaXoO (talk) 17:05, 24 March 2025 (UTC)
      • Thanks for doing that! If the BTS gets any sort of expansion then I'll consider using Lewisr (talk) 00:10, 25 March 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:39, 26 March 2025 (UTC)