Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Po'yin

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Po'yin

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 18:17, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 18:44, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 175 words (0 introduction, 144 body, 31 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 160 words (0 introduction, 129 body, 31 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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Support votes

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 19:10, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 04:45, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:42, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Imp
  • Not sure why you're using "by around 19 BBY". The relevant chapters are set between two 19 BBY events, and it's the Empire. When else could it have possibly occupied Po'yin but in 19 BBY? Imperators II(Talk) 14:07, 31 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Ok actually now that I realized I had made a typo in the reference and corrected that, "around 19 BBY" is still the most accurate here. As the reference says, MOF begins weeks after ROTS and spans a few months, meaning it is either still in 19 or falls into 18. Thus, "around 19" is the language. Wok142 (talk) 19:33, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Just want to confirm: you're using capitalized "Attack on Eyo-Dajuritz," but our article on that event uses a lower-case "attack". Is the other article in error? Imperators II(Talk) 08:20, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
    • Should be lowercase, my mistake. Good catch. Wok142 (talk) 17:25, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • I don't see a reference to Po'yin being a planet, unless I missed something Lewisr (talk) 04:23, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
    • It's described as a "homeworld," which world=planet. Wok142 (talk) 23:20, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
      • Typically we do take world as planet, but homeworld isn't in these cases, see Aris Ade's homeworld for example Lewisr (talk) 03:23, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
        • I see. Went ahead and changed that all up, let me know how it looks now. Wok142 (talk) 04:43, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
  • I think it should be made clearer that when Saw and the others traveled there is after the Eyo-Dajuritz events, since it just says the deal was set weeks earlier Lewisr (talk) 04:23, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
    • How's that? Wok142 (talk) 23:20, 3 June 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:42, 4 June 2025 (UTC)