Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Pitmaster's Choice

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Pitmaster's Choice

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:05, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Probably one of the least interesting recipes in the book to be honest
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Galaxy's Edge

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 03:20, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Yeah, I won't be trying this one. Immi Thrax (talk) 13:28, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:13, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:15, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:46, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
6. OOM 224 21:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Immi Thrax

• "the droid used the thin strips of meat hanging around the pit to make Pitmaster's Choice, meaning it could contain a variety of meats including nuna turkey or luggabeast meat"—This is a bit unclear as written. Based on the cookbook, Pitmaster's Choice is "jerky made from whatever type of meat the Pitmaster chose to jerkify, sometimes nuna turkey or luggabeast meat." Since jerky is meat rather than "containing" meat, that word choice is a little odd. Could you revise this for clarity? Immi Thrax (talk) 12:08, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Ah good point, how's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:16, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Good now! Immi Thrax (talk) 13:28, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:09, 25 August 2021 (UTC)