Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Pesmenben IV

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Pesmenben IV

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:25, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 03:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:NOVELS

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 1 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

- Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:43, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

1. Fan26 (Talk) 18:24, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
2. Herasoars^(comms) 04:33, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Kris

• The second paragraph is only two sentences, the first of which is very long! It's grammatically correct, of course, but it reads a bit like a run-on sentence and is potentially confusing. Could you add another period or two in there (or, in place of the semicolon, maybe)? But as I said, this is an opinion thing and not necessarily a hard-stop objection, so totally up to you. Herasoars^(comms) 20:30, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Tweaked it, should be better now. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:42, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

spooky

• 182 words, requires sectioning.—spookywilloww^talk 18:19, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

DFaceG

• Article exceeds word count of 250, no longer eligible for CAN, should be bumped to GAN. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:16, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

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