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Paataatus attack fleet
- Nominated by: Samonic
08:02, 14 June 2022 (UTC) - Nomination comments: 14th nomination related to the glorious Kilji Illumine, well, actually, to the Illumine Kilhorde, and probably the last Kilji CAN unless I missed something in Thrawn Ascendancy: Lesser Evil. I'm sorry, but you will not (99%) see Kilji CANs in this page anymore. Update: One Kilji CAN is missing.
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- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:18, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:15, 4 July 2022 (UTC)- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:55, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:19, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
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Unknown Regions is infobox exclusive.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:22, 16 June 2022 (UTC)- Is what I did adequate? Samonic 08:48, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
- Is what I did adequate? Samonic
CC-8
The mention of Thrawn's core name would look neater if formatted with brackets or commas- Fixed.
"Destruction of the Kilhorde" shouldn't be used in the infobox if it's not going to have its own article- It's a conjectural title, I thought I had to. Anyways, removed.
I don't think Nakirre's fate is relevant to this articleCommander Code-8 Hello There! 00:53, 2 July 2022 (UTC)- I fully disagree regarding Nakirre's fate. It's absolutely relevant. Samonic 17:55, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
- Gotta interject here and say you're both right, the information is relevant but needs to be rephrased to show that relevance more clearly eg "The loss of the Kilhorde reduced Nakirre's usefulness in the eyes of his ally to such an extent that Jixtus killed the now-defunct generalirius.", cleaned up of course but you get the idea :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:43, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof: I hope what I did is adequate. Samonic 12:17, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof: I hope what I did is adequate. Samonic
- Gotta interject here and say you're both right, the information is relevant but needs to be rephrased to show that relevance more clearly eg "The loss of the Kilhorde reduced Nakirre's usefulness in the eyes of his ally to such an extent that Jixtus killed the now-defunct generalirius.", cleaned up of course but you get the idea :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:43, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- I fully disagree regarding Nakirre's fate. It's absolutely relevant. Samonic
Manoof
That quote is a big chonky boi, can we cut it down to the first 2-3 sentences from Thrawn? (I know that'll be a pain with the audio, sorry!) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:43, 4 July 2022 (UTC)- All quotes are relevant, I do not think their removal will be beneficial. Samonic 12:13, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Responded with a screenshot on Discord, size is the issue with the quote at 93 words including attribution and the article body at 123 words. The quote also has reduced relevance after the first three sentences. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:11, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Samonic 08:58, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Samonic
- Responded with a screenshot on Discord, size is the issue with the quote at 93 words including attribution and the article body at 123 words. The quote also has reduced relevance after the first three sentences. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:11, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
- All quotes are relevant, I do not think their removal will be beneficial. Samonic
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:19, 12 July 2022 (UTC)