Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Paarin Minor (second nomination)

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Paarin Minor

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:24, July 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CAN, GAN and now CAN thanks to the mofference

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 14:15, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ECvote I'm not even sure you need the other sources bit but well see what others say Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:09, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 20:42, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

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501st
  • The article has a category for terrestrial planets, but no where in the body does it mention that it was terrestrial. 501st dogma(talk) 12:51, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I'm not sure the Databank or Encyclopedia's inclusion in the BTS is necessary as Warfare isn't included. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:52, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Please look at your affiliation categories. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 15:37, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Was it conquered by someone in 17 ABY? Why is it "until 17 ABY"? Also, you make no mention of the transition between the Remnant and the Empire. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:49, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • We don't know what happened afterwards. And fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:54, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
      • And the way you've written says that the Remnant lost control of the planet in 17 ABY. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:45, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
        • No, it says that it was under Remnant control until 17 ABY, nothing more. It is like I would say: Ghana was a British colony until 1949. This does not necessarily says that it wasn't afterwards. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:15, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
          • Again, no. "Until" signifies that something is happening/not happening up to a point. And you still haven't given any information as to when the Empire dissolved and the Remnant started. You'd be much better off saying "In 17 ABY, Paarin Minor was still under the control of..." as well as the Empire-Remnant transition stuff. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:27, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
            • Ok, thanks for your patience and the explanation. Have a look now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:27, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • "to create an artificial cloud that hid its clone troopers from the Separatist forces" Can you reword this? The quote doesn't confirm that it hid Clone troopers, just that they drew Separatist forces into the clouds and destroyed them. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:52, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
    • Missed a reference there. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:22, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
      • I don't think you need a double reference there, just the CSWE ref will do. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:44, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
        • Well, but as Dark Lord is the first source to mention this, shouldn't there be a reference to it. Plus, the sentence is built mixing informations from both sources. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:01, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
          • Since the CSWE covers everything mentioned in Dark Lord, one ref should do. As is, the entire sentence is sourced to both Dark Lord and the CSWE, which is incorrect because part of the sentence isn't mentioned at all in Dark Lord. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:12, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Context on the Clone Wars in the history section?
    • Done.
  • Release month for Rise of Darth Vader in the bts?
  • Can we get addition information on what other sources it appeared in in the BTS? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:01, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

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