Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ossorus

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Ossorus

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:38, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Brb praying to Oma-Oma
• Date Archived: 14:51, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 168 words (0 introduction, 154 body, 14 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 14:56, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 (he/him) 22:35, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:51, 29 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• The article would benefit from rearranging it so that information about all of its occupants is presented in one place and info about its defenses and protectors in another. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:07, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:47, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Hmm, sorry, I suppose my objection wasn't clear enough. I see you swapped around the two sentences in the first paragraph so that Oma-Oma's mention is close to Mekamok's mention. But the issue still persists due to that pair of sentences being bracketed by passages that discuss the city's defenses/protectors, i.e., the second sentence of the first paragraph and the third sentence (as well as the rest of it) of the second paragraph. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:26, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
      • That better? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:26, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
        • Indeed. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:51, 29 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:51, 29 March 2023 (UTC)