Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Orchis 2

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Orchis 2

• Nominated by: Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 08:34, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: There's very little to say about this place... Makes it the ideal comprehensive article candidate, I guess!

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 13:23, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:08, June 17, 2018 (UTC)
3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 18:54, June 20, 2018 (UTC)
4. Cwedin^(talk) 18:49, June 21, 2018 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:56, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Object

What time is it? Tommy o'clock!

• You're missing backup links.
  • There's no need for that actually, since both the writer and the illustrator can be sourced to the book directly. --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 13:17, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • Even better. Tommy Macaroni 13:23, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
• You don't need the full release date in the BTS, as it creates an unnecessary ref. The year will suffice, as that can be sourced to the book itself.
  • Fixed. --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 13:17, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
• "an immense depository of records and artifacts that covered the majority of the moon's surface.[1]" What coved the majority of the moon's surface, the depository or the records and artifacts? Please rephrase. Tommy Macaroni 12:30, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
  • How about this? --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 13:17, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Imp

• Does Galactic Atlas give any indication of a timespan for when the Graf Archive was present on the moon? Imperators II^(Talk) 19:02, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
  • All that can be said is that the in-universe version of the book was published some time after the Battle of Starkiller Base (since said battle is the last mentioned event in the included timeline). I'll try and incorporate this in the article. --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 19:18, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • ADDENDUM: Gammit Chond's maps are said to be ancient in the introduction. So I must assume that the book's "present time" is long after the First Order-Resistance war? --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 19:20, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
      • That'd be nice to have included in the article, then. Imperators II^(Talk) 04:13, June 16, 2018 (UTC)
        • Does my latest edit work for you? --Lelal Mekha ^{(Audience Room)} 10:00, June 17, 2018 (UTC)
          • I've changed it to something both more concise and specific that's still supported by the source. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:00, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

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