Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Onyx Leader/Legends

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Onyx Leader/Legends

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Manoof
  • How come this uses the title infobox but other Onyx callsigns/ships used the individual ship infobox? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:45, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Please update the archive attributes in the FFGweb citation, archivedate should be the only one used if webarchive.org has been used to archive the pages. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:45, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Needs Onyx disambig Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:45, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Imperial starfighters and TIE Defender categories missing (As a side note, onyx 1 and 2 seem to be missing the callsign category?). Will check Onyx 1 once these are addressed so you can fix any similar issues ahead of time :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:45, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
    • I also mentioned in Discord that Onyx Leader is used as an apparent call sign, while Onyx 1 and Onyx 2 (for that matter, also Onyx Four) are individual ship names. Others fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:56, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Looking at Brath's card and Lyttan Dree's card, I'm confused how you differentiate between which is a callsign and which is the ship? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:28, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Note I only included the things that specifically use the Onyx Leader name for sources. The New Essential Guide to Vehicles and Vessels and The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, Vol. II, p. 414 ("Onyx Squadron") don't mention the call sign, even though both mention Brath's role leading the squadron. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:42, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Also note that the exact image was used earlier for another card for Brath. However, with real life examples I can think about with people in law enforcement, they sometimes have current photos representing them not at the position they currently hold, but a previous one. Similar examples used for ones who are memorialized after line of duty deaths. There's no evidence that Brath immediately went to Onyx Squadron when he first started flying a Defender, so it's possible that he's not even serving that squadron at the time of that IU image. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:14, 12 March 2022 (UTC)