Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Omar Berenko

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Omar Berenko

• Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 22:05, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Where did Elzar hear about this guy I wonder?
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Support

1. Word count looking tight :P Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:17, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
2. Loqiical (talk) 10:48, 17 February 2022 (UTC)
3. I suspect the name "Omar" was taken from the actor Omar Sharif, who starred in Doctor Zhivago, which features a retreat also named Varykino. OOM 224 21:14, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
4. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:43, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:52, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
6. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:06, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braho'mar

• Anakin and Padme need context. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:24, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:23, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• Taking these two Complete Locations CAs as reference points, there's no need to mention the 2005 edition, and the authors of the Inside the Worlds of book should be mentioned. OOM 224 22:33, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. SilverSunbird (talk) 22:40, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
• Last couple of things
  • Seems to be missing the fact that he wrote "some of his most famous works" in the Room of Morning Mists. CL also describes him as a "tragic Naboo poet."
  • Unless I'm missing something, the book doesn't say he was never heard from again. OOM 224 22:46, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Added those details. I reworded the details about his disappearance, but I do not currently have access to the book so if someone could double-check exactly what it says about Berenko's disappearance that'd be great. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:21, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Double-checked. Can confirm that everything's in order OOM 224 21:05, 20 February 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• I think this bit is unnecessary to the article, feels like trivia: "...at the same spot where Jedi Padawan Anakin Skywalker and Senator Padmé Amidala would be secretly wed at the start of the Clone Wars in 22 BBY." It'd be relevant to the location itself but not so much Omar. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:22, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:21, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry to interject, but I believe this is actually relevant since it pins down the location at which he was kidnapped. OOM 224 21:05, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
      • And it's back in, as it should be. SilverSunbird (talk) 21:12, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
        • Feel free to dispute objections if you disagree, promise I won't take it personally :) Happy to strike given that clarification :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:43, 20 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Wordcount is around 162 for the body. SilverSunbird (talk) 22:05, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
• 163 words. SilverSunbird (talk) 17:23, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
• 164 words, thanks to Loqiical. SilverSunbird (talk) 20:32, 17 February 2022 (UTC)
• 158 words after removing a redundant statement. SilverSunbird (talk) 22:10, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:06, 21 February 2022 (UTC)