Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ollopom

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Ollopom

Impressive that they found this in Legends to use for the park. Fan26 (Talk) 12:57, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:30, July 21, 2019 (UTC)
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The Bts gets a bit repetitive with three consecutive sentences with a variation of "Ollopoms were first mentioned/first appeared", particularly the two last sentences. See if you can change up the wording a bit. 1358 ^(Talk) 23:37, July 17, 2019 (UTC)
- How's that? MasterFred^(Whatever) 05:03, July 18, 2019 (UTC)

~~Considering that Ollopoms can be owned as pet, what do you think about adding Category:Domesticated creatures?~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:46, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
- I wouldn't say Dok-Ondar having one in a container in his shop counts as the species being domesticated, personally. If we knew they were common pets, that'd be one thing, but we only know of Ollie, and we don't even know if she is domesticated or just......contained. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:59, July 20, 2019 (UTC)
  - Fair enough. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:30, July 21, 2019 (UTC)

~~You can specifically mention the Pom Petal plant, which is what they're mistaken for.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:13, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
- Added, and article created, though I removed the "plant" part, as I feel that is just a descriptive word, since "Pom Petal" is proper and also was the a name for it in Legends. MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:09, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
The second and third sentences of the body and the first of the BTS probably need splitting. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:56, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
- Done. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:42, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

~~Unsourced item in infobox.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 10:08, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
~~Link to diet pls.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 10:08, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
~~The diet category should be changed accordingly.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 10:08, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Yeesh. Haven’t really been putting a lot of attention into my editing the past week and it shows. Should be all fixed. MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:20, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
Please explain to me why ref 3 cannot simply be changed to ref 4. The information "can be obtained verbally from cast members working in the store," so basically you're still sourcing the info to the store, ergo ref 4. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:45, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
- The purpose is to clarify that this information is not something you can get by just looking at the scenery. I'm considering it similar to how we would have a ref note if something is not directly stated in a source but can be verified with cross-referencing. Basically, I feel it's worth specifying that this information can only be obtained from cast members so as not to make the reader think this information is available in physical form. MasterFred^(Whatever) 07:35, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
232 words, let's see an intro. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:04, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
- It is done, but is now over 250 words. Ugh, to the GAN. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:43, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

~~If the events of Galaxy's Edge can be dated or placed in the timeline, then I think it should be mentioned in the paragraph about Dok-Ondar owning Ollie.~~ Zed42 (talk) 21:56, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Technically, the theme park land's events have not yet been dated. Any concrete date is speculation. MasterFred^(Whatever) 07:33, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
- Sorry, I just realized you were probably looking for any time context, so I added a little. MasterFred^(Whatever) 07:41, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
  - Yeah, that's what I meant. Zed42 (talk) 04:53, July 29, 2019 (UTC)