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Obumubo Imperial garrison
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:52, September 2, 2020 (UTC)
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Support
Fan26 (Talk) 14:55, September 3, 2020 (UTC)- Zed42 (talk) 20:43, September 5, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:53, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Fan
In the first sentence, the garrison doesn't need to be identified as "Imperial" since it's already made clear the Empire established it.Fan26 (Talk) 14:44, September 2, 2020 (UTC)- Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 14:47, September 2, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Do you think it would be better to link Imperial Military first and pipelink the Galactic Empire somewhere else?UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:25, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
- I don't think so, I sounds more rational to me to link the larger organization rather than a branch of it as you get the bigger picture first. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 13:40, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:28, September 10, 2020 (UTC)