Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nydak

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Nydak

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Support

Object

Fan
  • Reference notes are unneccesary in the intro.
  • Make it clear that the Alpha is a subspecies and not a particular member. The way the intro is currently worded kind of implies the latter.
    • "dominated by members of the larger and stronger Nydak Alpha subspecies" is less wordy and would work better here. Fan26 (Talk) 19:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Mention the following in the body:
    • The Nydak Alpha
    • That nydaks were carnivorous.
    • Black eye color
    • The blue and light brown skin colors (this is a discrepancy between the infobox and the article, as the latter only describes grey skin)
    • Their spikes and Claws.
  • Planet is not linked in the body.
  • History section:
    • "In legends," Legends told by whom?
      • "according to some legends," identify these legends as being among the local legends described earlier. Fan26 (Talk) 19:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • "where Nightbrothers were thrown as an example to be killed and eaten by the beast." Again, thrown by whom?
      • ^This still needs to be handled. Fan26 (Talk) 19:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Identify Cal as a Jedi please. Fan26 (Talk) 18:21, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Actually I'd like it to be further specified that he's a Jedi Knight (or padawan, whichever he is in the game). Fan26 (Talk) 19:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • "On Dathomir, nydaks were considered an apex predator." Considered by whom? If this is just in-game information provided in the form of some sort of codex, nydaks being an apex predator can be taken as canonical fact and the article does not need to present this as if it is an IU opinion. Fan26 (Talk) 18:23, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Many things in the body require linking. Fan26 (Talk) 19:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
  • As there is no other piece of media in which the Nydak appears, please remove "first" in the BTS. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 18:37, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
Ratts
  • Page currently contains no reference to The Art of Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order. Our article for the book lists nydaks as appearing, so information will need to be incorporated. RattsT (talk) 19:11, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Not to sound like a broken record, but please respond directly to a reviewer, not in the comments. Look at other CAN reviews if you're confused. Anyway, have you actually checked the Art of book for new information? RattsT (talk) 19:24, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Fixed it. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:51, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed Fan26 and Ratts AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:18, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
    • As I told you over Discord, please respond to the actual objections instead of under "Comments". Fan26 (Talk) 19:19, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • A word count shows me that the article has reached the word limit for a Comprehensive Article at 250 words. Seeing as there are requests for more information, this number is only going to increase. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:21, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Could some one from the EduCorps remove this. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)