Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nut-paste sandwich

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Nut-paste sandwich

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 15:33, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: space PB&J
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Chiss Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 00:18, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
2. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:29, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:52, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:13, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
5. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:32, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan-paste sandwhich

• The article ought to be reworded so it's clear that it was edible by the Chiss. Currently it's worded as if it's edible exclusively within the Ascendacy's borders. Fan26 (Talk) 16:03, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:13, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

DFaceG

• The last sentence isn't necessarily a run-on but it drags a bit. Perhaps break that last bit regarding Thalias into its own smaller sentence. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:41, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:13, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:33, 3 November 2022 (UTC)