Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Number five special

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Number five special

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 20:55, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Food a naval tactic
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(5 ECs/2 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 01:45, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:05, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:19, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:30, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
5. Objection addressed via discord. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:52, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
6. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:12, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
7. Objections resolved via Discord OOM 224 20:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• You should specify what year the Utapau mission took place in.
  • Done. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:16, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
• Please specify Anakin', Obi-Wan's and Grievous's allegiances.
  • Done. Let me know if the wording is awkward. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:16, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
• You are missing a mention of the Clone Wars. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 21:01, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Well, that's embarrassing. It's been rectified. 😅 -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:16, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• "The two Republic Jedi Generals performed the number five special to board Grievous' DH-Omni Support Vessel while setting their hijacked freighter to ram the Support Vessel's hyperdrive." Given that Grievous' ship has already been identified as a DH-Omni, it feels awkward to restate that fact, especially twice in the same sentence. Fan26 (Talk) 15:29, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Condensed to "The two Republic Jedi Generals performed the number five special to board Grievous' Support Vessel while setting their hijacked freighter to ram the Vessel's hyperdrive." -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 16:54, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Luca Special

• Context for the Clone Wars?
  • Added “Galaxy-wide” as context — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 14:20, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
    • I meant more something like: "between the Galactic Republic and the Confederacy of Independent Systems" but that is fine. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:48, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
• Did they suceed in the maneuver? Worth mentioning, in my opinion. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:14, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Addressed. — YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 14:20, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Release date needs another source, see Yavin Code.
• You also mention that Big Bang is a story reel twice, I'd do some rewording to match the linked CA above. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:09, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you. I believe I've addressed both. How's it now? -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 17:23, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Could use some more links in the infobox.
  • You've now got a dupe link there OOM 224 20:28, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Clone Wars isn't necessary.
• Repetition of "during" OOM 224 21:53, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
  • I think I got all three. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 21:58, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Station" is infobox-exclusive OOM 224 20:28, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)