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Noris

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 21:37, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:39, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
  3. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:03, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 14:33, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:46, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • Missing links to core name, hyperspace, alien. I think it's unnecessary to specify Rivlex's core name as he's only mentioned once.
  • Please specify that the Orisson is a Clarr light cruiser, remove the pipelink.
  • The warships Roscu saw weren't the whole fleet, please reword. "Warships part of the Grysk operative Jixtus's fleet" or something like that will do.
  • Was the design really identical? The BattleChiefs were 99% the ones she first encountered, wasn't the one at Ornfra a WarMaster or something like that? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:14, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
    • all done. keeping Rivlex's full name per discussion in server a few days ago BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 14:59, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
  • (Review note/Heads-up): Jixtus's fleet isn't conjectural. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:42, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Weren't the warships Roscu encountered SIX warships? I would prefer you specify.
  • You could use this quote from Roscu: "They couldn't have been waiting here unless they had ships waiting at all four of our possible destinations."
  • The warships Roscu encountered have the same configuration: Prism-class BattleChiefs, not a "similar" configuration. Please reword. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:59, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please include a mention of the Unknown Regions in the article's body, currently it's infobox-exclusive. Imperators II(Talk) 10:11, 6 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:33, 10 October 2022 (UTC)