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Noeu sphere racquet
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I've got woozits and whatzits galore
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
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Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 19:27, June 11, 2019 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 04:54, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 12:52, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)
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Imp sphere racquet
"in his bedroom in his home in the city of Mos Espa on the planet Tatooine." — again, please reword this to avoid awkward repetition.Imperators II(Talk) 09:26, June 12, 2019 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
Why are you using plural in the lead sentence? It's inconsistent with your other gadget articles.Imperators II(Talk) 09:26, June 12, 2019 (UTC)- Re-worded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, June 12, 2019 (UTC)
In the last sentence of the body, you're referring five times to Skywalker using the pronouns "he" and "his." Please vary a bit.Imperators II(Talk) 09:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)- Good point, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:33, June 12, 2019 (UTC)