Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nintuk

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Nintuk

  • Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 05:57, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 21:07, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:40, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvoteAyrehead02 (talk) 23:55, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:10, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:10, March 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • "The wanted posting pictured Nintuk with a necklace made of what appeared to be large teeth." The way this is currently written is too speculative.
    • Changed to remove the last bit of that sentence. Not sure how to correctly describe the necklace without speculating (tooth-shaped beads wouldnt be correct, as if they are teeth then they are not beads and vice-versa)
  • The infobox mentions the Rebellion era, while the body just says during the reign of the Galactic Empire. If she lived during the Rebellion era, pleas specify this in the body.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:58, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
    • Removed all references to the rebellion era. Since all we know is the wanted posted was issued by the empire, possibly even the imperial remnant, so specifying any era from rsie of the empire to legacy would be speculation. Manoof (talk) 02:26, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • Can we get some context on what an Imperial Peacekeeping Certificate is? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:42, March 18, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  • Is that a necklace she's wearing? You could mention that in the body. Stake black msg 06:33, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
    • Oops, added a mention of it, also specified it's not known what it is made of nor if it was worn regularly. Manoof (talk) 06:57, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
      • I would say that you should remove the bit about it not being known if she regularly wore it. Since you only say the picture shows her wearing the necklace it doesn't imply she often wore it, plus we tend to avoid saying it is unknown if. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:10, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
        • How's that? Manoof (talk) 02:00, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, the German Wookieepedia entry mentions an "Imperial Peacekeeping Certificate". What's that all about? Stake black msg 06:40, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
    • Missed that, added it in. Manoof (talk) 06:57, March 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Is there any info on who illustrated her? Or at least the book as a whole. That's kinda important. Stake black msg 21:12, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • I don't have the book with me at the moment, but from when this was asked on another nom, the book only lists the illustrators, of which there are 10, and doesn't specify who did which images... Manoof (talk) 00:51, March 12, 2014 (UTC)