- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Nim Mindbend
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Three of Three
(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)
Support
- nayayen★talk 12:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
~Savage
14:17, March 18, 2012 (UTC)- —Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:58, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Object
- Savaged
Just a preliminary one: Balnab, as far as we know at this point, is not a species identification, it's a name for a particular group of castaways who crash-landed on the planet Balnab. As such, I don't think we can say that particular bounty hunter was a member of said group. ~Savage 16:06, March 17, 2012 (UTC)- Changed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
OK, might as well do a full review. How do we know Mindbend is male?- Per the guide and his looking. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
I don't follow. Does the episode guide say Mindbend is male? Seeing only the shoulders and head leaves it ambiguous. ~Savage 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)- Yes. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Per the guide and his looking. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
We don't know that Chalmun owned the cantina at this point, do we? I'd use "Mos Eisley Cantina," I think.- Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Might as well spell out who the "other target" was.- To keep at least a slight difference between the three articles I wrote it that way and I believe it is fine. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think the article needs to spell it out to be comprehensive, personally. ~Savage 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)- Fine, done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
- To keep at least a slight difference between the three articles I wrote it that way and I believe it is fine. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Perhaps add a line to BTS that the blue tint of the image makes it impossible to definitively state Mindbend's skin and eye color. ~Savage 16:09, March 17, 2012 (UTC)- I'm not entirely why this should be included as I've never seen that anywhere. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Because someone might think his skin color should be purple and his eyes yellow based on the image, without realizing that the entire image is tinted blue and prevents that kind of identification from being made. ~Savage 23:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)- Thanks, I added it now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
- I'm not entirely why this should be included as I've never seen that anywhere. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:45, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
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