Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nightdragon

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Nightdragon

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Support

  1. ECvote I hate that Nightdragon man-of-war isn't italicised. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:56, 13 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote It needs "-class" in the name for that to happen. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:52, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. Please review my changes and our conversation on Discord for your future nominations. Nice work solving the objections! Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 13:54, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Review note: you need to have an independent clause following a semicolon. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:04, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • There's no mention of the first appearance in the BtS. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:10, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
  • From what I can gather from the article, Chaos Rising does not necessarily denote the Nightdragon as an individual species. I imagine you'll need to reference that to Lesser Evil.
  • Dragon is a disambiguation page so belongs in an {{Otheruses}} at the top of the article rather in the body.
  • I don't think you should call the subject a "type of dragon" based on it's name. For example, komodo dragon is the name of a lizard. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:24, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
    • done, should it also be removed the infobox?
Samonic hates the memories sections
  • The quote should use |translated=1
  • "Powerful piece" is POV, if Ba'kif/Thrass/Thrawn considered it one, reword it. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 10:13, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
  • The CA being in the Unknown Regions, and the Nightdragon m-o-w being a m-o-w are irrelevant facts. The context for Nightdragon m-o-w could be "warship class."
  • Is the nightdragon confirmed to be a creature? I don't think it was. If so, please enlighten me.
  • Remove "first appeared" from the BTS, it only appears once, "appeared" will do.
  • Remove the infobox, it's filled with speculation. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 14:40, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Can you add that the Chiss (Thrawn) considered the piece the most powerful? (And maybe, that he compared himself to a night dragon when explaining his exile to Ar'alani) Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 21:28, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:04, 19 September 2022 (UTC)