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Natchgas
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:13, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 14:27, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 133 words (0 introduction, 76 body, 57 behind the scenes)
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Support
Fan26 (Talk) 20:01, 26 March 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 20:38, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 14:24, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
Object
Imp
The lead sentence feels like a bit of a run-on, plus it also seems like that historiographic bit about Mos Espa in 32 BBY is wedged in between two purely descriptive passages.Imperators II(Talk) 07:20, 8 April 2023 (UTC)- Split it and exapnded it slightly. We only know the description of the last sentence to be true of the Slave Quarter Row generators, not all generators, so the previous sentences is needed to introduce that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
- Whatever you did there it works for me now. :P Imperators II(Talk) 14:24, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- Split it and exapnded it slightly. We only know the description of the last sentence to be true of the Slave Quarter Row generators, not all generators, so the previous sentences is needed to introduce that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:24, 9 April 2023 (UTC)