- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Naboo Cooler
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 02:28, December 23, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:58, December 25, 2019 (UTC)- QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 13:49, December 27, 2019 (UTC) - UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:57, December 28, 2019 (UTC)
- Zed42 (talk) 11:45, December 30, 2019 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 20:18, December 30, 2019 (UTC)
Object
QGJ
Why is the lead sentence formatted in plural form? Naboo Coolers were beverages that could be found on the Outer Rim planet Actlyon.QuiGonJinn(Talk) 07:27, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
- Not any particular reason, but I'd seen Bloody Rancor worded similarly at the front, and it helped make that first sentence more concise than otherwise. I can find another way to put it if I need to, though.—spookywillowwtalk 18:35, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
- Since there is no established policy on this, you can keep it the way it is. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 13:49, December 27, 2019 (UTC)
- Since there is no established policy on this, you can keep it the way it is. QuiGonJinn
- Not any particular reason, but I'd seen Bloody Rancor worded similarly at the front, and it helped make that first sentence more concise than otherwise. I can find another way to put it if I need to, though.—spookywillowwtalk 18:35, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
I think you can add Ana Tolla's quote about spilling to the article.- Added.—spookywillowwtalk 18:35, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
As far as I can see, there is at least one other mention of the drink in the novel, the one about its smell. "She dug in the closet for a leather jacket that didn't smell like Naboo Cooler." Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:40, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
- Touched on.—spookywillowwtalk 18:35, December 25, 2019 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:20, December 30, 2019 (UTC)