Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Muun officer corps

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Muun officer corps

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  1. Just in time for the annual Muun-viewing—0% taxes, today only! Remember not to go over the Muun! - - -CIS roundel OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 20:34, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
  2. LordMominutiae (talk) 04:44, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 13:54, October 4, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:03, October 7, 2020 (UTC)
  5. --Lewisr (talk) 04:08, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, October 8, 2020 (UTC)

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UberSoldat
  • From checking the source: "To protect its foreclosed assets, the Banking Clan fields a Muun officer corps that directs its IG-series battle droid army." It appears that the article is missing info about protecting assets. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:25, September 28, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
  • Though from the name alone we can't assume they were all Muuns, I think it is worth noting the corps shared its name with the species. Fan26 (Talk) 17:08, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
OOM
Ayrehead
  • I think you can work in that the IGBC was founded and is maintained by Muun (per Endless Vigil) rather than awkwardly mentioning the species separately at the end. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:16, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. CIS roundel Erebus Chronus (talk) 15:20, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
      • You should say "members of the Muun species" rather than the whole species. I'd also split the sentence after that and start a new sentence with "The corps directed the..." Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:37, October 8, 2020 (UTC)

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