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Mustafarian Lava Bun
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 18:15, 10 June 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
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Support
- I want to know what they'd actually look like if you made them at home :P VergenceScatter (talk) 04:38, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Dammit, now I'm hungry. Fan26 (Talk) 02:42, 12 June 2021 (UTC)- Hot. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 18:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:32, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:43, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:41, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
Why not establish context for Southern Mustafarians upon their first mention?UberSoldat93(talk) 07:51, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- Moved. JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 15:32, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- Moved. JediMasterMacaroni
OOM
"Made from a dough, Southern Mustafarians cooked the bread directly on […]" Sounds as if Southern Mustafarians were made from dough.(Emphasis mine) This line in the article: "Finding the bread's look impressive, he tasted it and found its flavor to be equally so" contradicts the lead quote: "Looked nearly as impressive as it tasted."OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)- Good catches, both should be done. JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 20:37, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
- Good catches, both should be done. JediMasterMacaroni
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:46, 16 June 2021 (UTC)