Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mustafarian Lava Bun

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Mustafarian Lava Bun

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:15, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. I want to know what they'd actually look like if you made them at home :P VergenceScatter (talk) 04:38, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
2. Dammit, now I'm hungry. Fan26 (Talk) 02:42, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
3. Hot. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 18:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:32, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:43, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
6. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:41, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Why not establish context for Southern Mustafarians upon their first mention? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:51, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Moved. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:32, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• "Made from a dough, Southern Mustafarians cooked the bread directly on […]" Sounds as if Southern Mustafarians were made from dough.
• (Emphasis mine) This line in the article: "Finding the bread's look impressive, he tasted it and found its flavor to be equally so" contradicts the lead quote: "Looked nearly as impressive as it tasted." OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Good catches, both should be done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:37, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:46, 16 June 2021 (UTC)