Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mudhorn cave

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Mudhorn cave

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote This is the way. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:25, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
  2. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:35, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Keep 'em coming. I have spoken. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:13, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 08:29, February 11, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ben
Editor
  • Does the word “mudhorn” in the first sentence need to be bolded if it’s a conjecture title?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:21, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • There is a piece of concept art in the credits that appears to feature the cave.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:42, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:53, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • I was referring to one of the Mando fighting the mudhorn outside what looks like the cave. But the current image works. Should that fact that concept art is featured in the credits be mentioned in the behind the scenes?--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:25, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
        • I would say no, since everything in the show has concept art of some sort, some of it was just released publicly. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:28, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Maybe put the writer in the behind the scenes--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:42, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • Putting the writer is pretty unnecessary, which is why you don't see it in any nominated article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:45, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • You write that the event happened around 9 ABY, yet the note says it happened in that year. I vote is to use the latter opinion.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:28, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the sentence describing the interior, you can put that it was dark--Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:49, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Mando uses a light while in the cave. Maybe that’s not important to mention, it’s up to you. You may need to rewatch the scene to see what he does with the light, as we shouldn’t assume he used it see ahead or something--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:43, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • It's very clear he uses it to observe his surroundings in search of the egg as he moves farther away from the entrance. This detail can go into Djarin's page instead. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:47, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • Would you be able to add a brief physical description of the cave? Zed42 (talk) 19:07, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • I'd like to see a brief context for the mudhorn, considering its importance to the subject of the article.
  • If I remember correctly, it was the Jawas who took the Mandalorian to the cave. I believe it's worth mentioning.
  • Although it'd be nice to have a concept art image in BTS, I don't think there is room enough room for it. However, you should mention the artist(s) behind the creation of that cave like Jama Jurabaev in BTS.
  • The BTS should mention that the cave was first pictured/revealed in that trailer. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:29, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • All done. Is it acceptable if I provided an archive link instead of a screenshot of the tweet? UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:08, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
      • I don't think so. The sourcing policy categorically states that "when citing social media posts (Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr, etc.) in articles, an accompanying screenshot of the post must be uploaded to Wookieepedia and linked in the reference itself." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:21, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:29, February 11, 2020 (UTC)