- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Mosthigh priest
- Nominated by: Toqgers (talk) 22:22, May 3, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: See the first nomination here
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 10:54, May 9, 2020 (UTC) 
QuiGonJinn 
(Talk) 14:56, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 20:02, May 9, 2020 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 20:37, May 9, 2020 (UTC)
- TK-462 (talk) 18:51, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Fan
"Jakan retained the title of High Priest throughout the entirety of the Yuuzhan Vong War, though, even when he represented the priest caste on Supreme Overlord Shimrra Jamaane's Great Council and was elevated to the leading priest of the Yuuzhan Vong following the conquest of Coruscant" I think this sentence contains too much extra information on the father and can be cut down to a bit tacked on to the end of the prior sentence explaining that he was not promoted to mosthigh priest.Fan26 (Talk) 04:28, May 4, 2020 (UTC)- I'll see what I can do to cut that down. Might bring it below the threshhold of a needing an intro, so stay tuned :) Toqgers (talk) 21:30, May 4, 2020 (UTC)
- Okay, I've cut the latter half of the sentence to just say that he remained High Priest until the end of the war. Is that satisfactory? With the body minus bts sitting at 145 words now, I've also cut the introduction. Toqgers (talk) 21:45, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:25, May 14, 2020 (UTC)