Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Moss chip/Legends

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Moss chip/Legends

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:31, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Canon version is yummy
• WookieeProject (optional): Novels

(3 ECs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:38, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
2. Dentface (talk) 02:03, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:57, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
4. Liverpool92 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:16, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
6. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 22:44, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
7. OOM 224 20:54, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Since all clones are humans, you should add "edible by humans" in the info-box. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:53, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fair point. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:22, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Dent

• This may be more a personal preference, and if you'd rather not make this change, that's totally fine, but it bothers me that the only descriptor used for Besany Wennen is "Human." She isn't the one eating the chips, so it's not like noting her species is necessary. It'd seem better (again, in my opinion) to describe her as a Republic agent as it's more specific than just her species. Dentface (talk) 00:56, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nah that's fine, added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:59, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• It feels weird not to mention the location of the visit Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:51, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:43, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Immoss Thrax

• This may be overly picky, but since Legends can be weird about categorizing things differently from reality, does the source identify moss as a plant? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 23:05, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • It does not, but I don't really see that as a necessary extra ref.
    • How about nudging it into "other ingredients" instead of "plant-based"? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 10:31, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Sure. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 15:01, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
• Punctuation/grammar issue in the BTS. Some possible fixes (or DIY) Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 23:05, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • "While it is stated at one point in the novel that the chips were served on a plate, a separate sentence maintains that they were served in a bowl."
  • "At one point in the novel, it is stated that the chips were served on a plate; however, a separate sentence maintains that they were served in a bowl."
    • Fixed, nice catch. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:43, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:54, 30 October 2021 (UTC)