Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Moon of Alchenaut

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Moon of Alchenaut

~~Good work! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)~~

Something about the phrase "herbivorous creatures o'cerrys," in the second sentence of the intro, feels a bit off due to the three 's', at least for me. I think it could be reworded so plural o'cerrys isn't directly next to plural creatures. Fan26 (Talk) 15:18, May 2, 2019 (UTC)
- The three 's' don't feel weird to me, but I've reworded the sentence anyway. Have a look. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:49, May 6, 2019 (UTC)
  - Apologies for the over-nitpicking. Fan26 (Talk) 16:57, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

~~Can the book directly be used to source "at some point around 990 BBY"?~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:35, May 7, 2019 (UTC)
- Very good point, thanks. Please take a look. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:00, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

~~Does the book actually specify Alchenaut is the moon itself? The phrase "moon of Alchenaut" suggests to me that Akchenaut might be the planet.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:48, May 10, 2019 (UTC)
- Personally, I believe it's reasonable to infer here that "moon of Alchenaut" means the same as "the moon Alchenaut," so I'd like to hear another opinion on this. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:20, May 11, 2019 (UTC)
  - If no other decision is made, could it be treated the same as articles like the moon of Drazkel, with "moon of" in the title? Zed42 (talk) 11:23, May 11, 2019 (UTC)
    - After some further exploration of precedent on the site, I've made the suggested change of the article's title. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)
Hold up, I make this article over 250 words now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:50, June 5, 2019 (UTC)
- Oh, for fuck's sake. Thanks for the heads-up, I'll archive this and see you back on GAN. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:28, June 5, 2019 (UTC)