Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Molten man

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Molten man

• Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 08:52, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A by-product of Project Stardust. Twinned with lizard-crow.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. I now have an image of burnt-up Ani clones zombying though Mustafarian plains. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 10:43, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:50, August 16, 2020 (UTC)

   UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:20, August 17, 2020 (UTC)

3. Fan26 (Talk) 17:25, August 18, 2020 (UTC)
4. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:08, August 27, 2020 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:23, August 29, 2020 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• More context should be provided for the quote. Specifically, saying who Mother Sssl was speaking to. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 09:31, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. RattsT (talk) 09:36, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
• "a comic written by Cavan Scott and published by IDW Publishing on […]" indicates the comic was written and published on the same day. I recommend changing it to "a comic written by Cavan Scott that was published by IDW Publishing on […]". - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 09:44, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • I don't really see how it can be interpreted from that sentence that it was written and published on the same day. Grammatically, the example you provided means the same thing, and there's precedence for using only a single clause. RattsT (talk) 10:00, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • I suppose it's just me then. Striking. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 10:13, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
• Pipelink to Galactic Empire should only include "Imperial," not "Imperial forces." - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 10:13, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. RattsT (talk) 10:16, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
• The appearances section of the two articles are inconsistent. Per precedent, (Mentioned only, in flashback) should be used instead of {{Mo}} + {{Flash}}. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 10:31, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Handled for both. RattsT (talk) 10:34, August 15, 2020 (UTC)

Braha'tok enthusiast

• Same objection as Lizard-crow. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 20:09, August 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. RattsT (talk) 20:44, August 16, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Context for Mustafar. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:17, August 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 19:55, August 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Same objection from Lizard-crow: Comic book series name in BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:32, August 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • See other nom. RattsT (talk) 20:55, August 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Error in Ref 2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:09, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • How embarrassing. Fixed. RattsT (talk) 22:46, August 28, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:23, August 29, 2020 (UTC)