Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mocoa

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Mocoa

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 00:28, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Star Wars has their version of hot cocoa, what a treat.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:53, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
  2. Good work. Fan26 (Talk) 00:38, April 10, 2019 (UTC)
  3. Zed42 (talk) 07:42, April 13, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:10, April 18, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:27, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "In 3 BBY,[2] an Apprentice Legislature pathfinding class led by Chief Pangie undertook their first hike on the planet Alderaan. When Leia Organa's group returned from the trek early, they went to relax to the group's chalet, which served as their headquarters." The hike isn't the subject of the article. I think these two sentences could be compressed into one. Fan26 (Talk) 03:04, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
  • Please create a page for the redlink I've introduced in the article. You may want to look at The Force Awakens: Rey's Story (audiobook) as precedent.
  • Can you provide a more specific location for the event rather than just Alderaan, or is it all the book says?
    • Made it to read 'the mountains of Alderaan', which is about all there is.—spookywillowwtalk 21:26, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
  • Does the book provide a good amount of information about that chalet to make it deserve its own article?
  • Context for Leia please.
  • The drink being potable by humans is currently infobox-exclusive, and should also be mentioned in the article body.
  • I believe mocoa is also mentioned much later in the book, and has something to do with Kier Domadi if I remember correctly. Please revise. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:34, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
  • Context for Kier Domadi, please.
  • Does the book actually state that it was months later? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:38, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
    • Not in that chapter, but added a note as it was stated elsewhere. Let me know if that works or not^^ —spookywillowwtalk 22:06, April 8, 2019 (UTC)
      • Oh I just wanted to know if the book confirms it or not, I don't think an additional reference note is necessary in that case. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:53, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You need to specify that it was Organa's group within the hiking class that finished. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:26, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • Are there not other species in the group who drink mocoa? If so they should be added to the article.
    • The only people mentioned to have mugs were human; even though other species were part of the class, it doesn’t name them to be drinking it.—spookywillowwtalk 14:27, April 9, 2019 (UTC)
      • Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 10:34, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to strike objection (EC only)

  1. ECvote Ayrehead's objections have been addressed for almost a month now. Imperators II(Talk) 10:27, May 7, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 10:30, May 7, 2019 (UTC)