Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Miss Theelin

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Miss Theelin

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:33, November 25, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Miss Theelin Live; A purple people party production; Coming to a galaxy near you this winter"

(4 ECs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 03:49, December 9, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, December 15, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Although should there be final punctuation in the intro quote? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 16:32, December 29, 2016 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 20:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)
  5. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 02:00, January 14, 2017 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:51, January 15, 2017 (UTC)
  7. ECvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 20:33, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Cevan
  • Is it possible that the "purple people party" is an actual organization/initiative of sorts (if so, I assume it'd be "Purple People Party"), one that deserves its own article? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 02:10, December 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • Its possible, but It doesn't seem likely, though the idea is amusing. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:37, December 9, 2016 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • Just wanted to confirm this: "A number of promotional posters [...] were posted" - you source this to "Deception", does that mean multiple posters appear in that episode? If not you should probably source it to multiple episodes. Imperators II(Talk) 11:38, December 20, 2016 (UTC)
    • Just one, though I think sourcing every episode in the appearance list would be overdoing it. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)
      • I think adding just one more—which I did—is sufficient. Imperators II(Talk) 20:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • At the very least, I believe that this article should at least note which planets the posters for the beauty pageant were found on.
  • The BTS should provide some information about the fact that it reoccurred.
  • "an attractive Theelin woman" I know that it is for a beauty pageant, but does any source state this explicitly?
  • I would note in the quote that it is aurebesh text. I would also note that the poster had aurebesh text in the body.
  • The body should mention the coloration of the poster.
  • "during the galaxy's winter season" Does anything say that it is the galaxy's winter season? If nothing says this, I would just state that it occurred during the winter and leave it at that.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:41, January 7, 2017 (UTC)
  • I think you should be able to fill out at an organization infobox for this topic.
  • Are the semicolons in the quote in the Aurebesh text? If not, please remove them. In either case, I think that it would probably be best to display the quote as three lines since that is how the post formats it.
  • As a note, you don't need to link anything inside of a quote template that is linked elsewhere in the article. I fixed this, just something to keep in mind.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 20:14, January 15, 2017 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that was an oversight on my part. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:28, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

No punctuation on the poster. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:29, December 29, 2016 (UTC)