Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Min-Reva

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Min-Reva

• Nominated by: DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 00:43, September 2, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:For Project Novels

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:02, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
2. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:19, September 17, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:32, September 20, 2013 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:53, September 22, 2013 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 23:29, September 29, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. SE
   • In the intro, can you flip the sentence regarding the battle of Kalandis Seven around a bit to reflect that the name of the battle is conjectural?
     • Changed.
   • Can you also do this in the bio?
     • Also changed.
   • Can you add in a NOTOC?
     • Added.
   • In the bio can you give some context on how the spaceport was destroyed?
     • Also added. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 05:29, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
       • Can you reword that paragraph a bit? As it is, it says the beacons allowed the starfighters to target the base, and that the base was destroyed, but not that it was destroyed by the starfighters. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:13, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
         • Added to the last sentence that it was destroyed by Republic starfighters. Word count is at 252 now btw I can re-nom it again for GA if someone archives this. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 23:01, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
           • No, there's no need for this or any of the other squad members to go to the GAN. I removed the stuff about Amden, as it's not really relevant and doesn't need to be repeated on every character's page, and there was no need for Malcom to be mentioned in the intro. By the time I finished my cleanup, I removed the intro since it had dropped below 200. Cade Calrayn 02:11, September 9, 2013 (UTC)
   • Nice work. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:46, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • Could you mention that Min-Reva's species and gender were not identified in the BTS?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:59, September 14, 2013 (UTC)
     • Mentioned. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 00:33, September 15, 2013 (UTC)
3. Ecks Dee
4. *"During the course of the battle, the squad was tasked with the destruction of local Imperial-controlled spaceport." Missing a word here. A spaceport, the spaceport, or spaceports? 1358 ^(Talk) 10:25, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
   • • Should be fixed now. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 01:09, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

1. CC-8
   • Can you explain how the voice only thing works in a short story, it makes me think its an audiobook or something.
     • They story says "Jace listened to the crackling voices speak up... [Zenhai, Kayle, Min-Reva]". To me I'd say that counts as a voice only, but I may be mistaken. While it says they do speak in the story it doesn't say what Min-Reva or the other soldiers said.
   • Can you say the name of the one guy who gets killed and make casualty link to Death. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 02:55, September 24, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 00:47, September 25, 2013 (UTC)
       • Wait, if it's ambiguous if that guy died then the link to death won't be necessary, how about just saying that he was badly injured. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 03:26, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
         • Re-worded. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 04:32, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Cadeth

• Quote for the character. Cade Calrayn 15:08, September 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • There is no available quote. The text says "Jace listened to the crackling voices speak up... [Zenhai, Kayle, Min-Reva]" but doesn't say what each soldier says though. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:12, October 1, 2013 (UTC)

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