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Milvayne processing center
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:21, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
Zed42 (talk) 20:13, February 22, 2020 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 14:20, February 23, 2020 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 18:35, February 23, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:07, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
Object
Zed
You should specify what the purpose of the processing center was.- There's no elaboration on that in the comic. Am I meant to go off real life definition of one? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:06, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- From what Klam tells Aphra, I think it can be said that new arrivals to the planet had to first stay at the processing center. Zed42 (talk) 21:18, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:35, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- From what Klam tells Aphra, I think it can be said that new arrivals to the planet had to first stay at the processing center. Zed42 (talk) 21:18, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- There's no elaboration on that in the comic. Am I meant to go off real life definition of one? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:06, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
Context is required for the Milvayne Authority and Aphra.- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:06, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
Shouldn't the infobox list the Milvayne Authority as an affiliation?Zed42 (talk) 20:55, February 19, 2020 (UTC)- It's only a mention in one sentence. There's nothing that says the Milvayne Authority owned it. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:06, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- At the very least, the Milvayne Authority were known to enforce their laws at the center, so they had some form of control over it. Zed42 (talk) 21:18, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- Ok fair enough. Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:35, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- At the very least, the Milvayne Authority were known to enforce their laws at the center, so they had some form of control over it. Zed42 (talk) 21:18, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- It's only a mention in one sentence. There's nothing that says the Milvayne Authority owned it. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:06, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
I think more detail can be added regarding Klam's family being reported in regard to the information about Gurtyl mentioned in the quote, and you could specify that the minor infractions were attributed to her parents.Zed42 (talk) 21:18, February 19, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:35, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
- I believe you should also add the details about Gurtyl, since it's mentioned in the quote. Zed42 (talk) 19:06, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:36, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
- I believe you should also add the details about Gurtyl, since it's mentioned in the quote. Zed42 (talk) 19:06, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:35, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
Sexes can be linked to.- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:36, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
"had a stamp on the wrong page." I'm guessing this is how Vulaada describes it in the comic, but since it wasn't specified what was stamped, I'd recommend you reword that bit.Fan26 (Talk) 17:44, February 20, 2020 (UTC)- Does this look better? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:36, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
While the Milvayne City bit is sourced particularly to Doctor Aphra 28, it is sourced to issue 27 in the infobox. Please revise.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:21, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:36, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:25, February 26, 2020 (UTC)